심슨어학원에 오신 것을 환영합니다.

> 프로그램 > 포트폴리오관리

[2025 Gettysburg Address]	작성자 : 조성진
구분 : 뉴스	2025-08-28 오후 5:52:00
In the Gettysburg Address, there is a saying: 'Government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the Earth.'." I believe the meaning of this phrase is to maintain the economy, reinvigorate citizens, and to gather the citizens' ideas." ~~First, I think it is because of economic~~. Firstly, it stems from economic reasons. The economy can be activated if there are citizens. But if there ~~aren't~~aren't any citizens, the economy fails to activate," and if the economy fails to activate, they can't buy weapons to fight," then they will lose the war. So, I think it is pointing out the importance of citizens. ~~Second, I think it is for to reinvigorate citizens~~. Secondly, it aims to reinvigorate citizens. If he doesn't reinvigorate them, they will lose their will." And if they give up, they can't win the war. ~~And for last, I think it is for to collect citizen's idea~~. Lastly, it aims to collect citizens' ideas. If there is a government "of the people, by the people, for the people," then the government will listen to them. And if there are many citizens' ideas, they can make a better country. IN In conclusion, I think think the meaning of the phrase, 'Government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the Earth,' is to reinvigorate citizens, maintain ~~economic~~the economy and collect citizens' ideas. Suggestions for Improvement: You could consider adding more context to the Gettysburg Address within the essay, as this would provide deeper insights into what you discuss. Also, work on varying your sentence structure for better readability. Your Score: B Reasoning: Your essay shows a good understanding of the topic. A few grammatical errors were noted and corrected. You could improve by providing more detailed analysis and context.

[동영상이 2배이상으로 재생될경우 대처방법 클릭!!] [flashPlayer18Beta다운로드]

	[2025 Gettysburg Address]
	[2025 Gettysburg Address]

The Simson School