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[2025 Gettysburg Address]	작성자 : 조성진
구분 : 뉴스	2025-08-28 오후 5:51:00
"Lincoln said that ~~goverment~~ government is responsible for the people. People ~~has~~ have many roles. They ~~muss~~ must defend the nation and pay taxes. Also, ~~pepole~~ people solve problems when the country is in trouble. For ~~exampel~~ example, last December, when President Yoon declared martial law, our people ~~stpepd~~ stepped forward and prevented the worst. Lincoln's speech is not simply words. He wanted to teach the ~~pepole~~ people what role ~~goverment~~ government and people have. He gave the speech so that we think again about the definition of people and ~~goverment~~ government. So, I think Lincoln’s speech means that ~~goverment~~ government is an institution answerable to the people." Suggestions for Improvement: It would be great if you utilized some synonyms to avoid repetition (i.e., instead of using the term 'people' repetitively, you could use 'citizens,' 'population,' etc.). Also, please be careful with spelling, especially with the term "government." It would be more engaging to use some more vivid verbs and adjectives. Your Score: B

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	[2025 President Lee Jae-myung]
	[2025 Gettysburg Address]

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