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[2025 President Lee Jae-myung]	작성자 : 조성진
구분 : 뉴스	2025-08-28 오후 5:46:00
Title: ~~Why the citizens lead the continent?~~ Why Do Citizens Lead the Continent? I ~~think I believe~~ believe the citizens ~~lead~~ lead the continent. But ~~why?~~ Why is that? 1. ~~Citizens vote the president with their with their belief and agony.~~ Citizens vote for the president based on their beliefs and concerns. The citizens vote for president to lead our country efficiently. ~~The president leads our country is right.~~ Indeed, the president is supposed to lead our country. But ~~judging the president and his policy is by the citizens.~~ the judgment of the president and his policy is in the hands of the citizens. 2. ~~They try to keep their country which the government cannot lead well.~~ They strive to preserve their country, which the government may not always succeed in leading effectively. They have the responsibility to keep the country ~~by the people.~~ secure for the people. 3. The government is for the people, by the people, so they have ~~frees and qualifications~~ freedoms and rights to lead their country. The citizens can give their opinions for the country. So, the country is led by the people, for the people. Suggestions for Improvement: Improve your sentence construction and ensure clarity in your statements. Also, use appropriate conjunctions, prepositions, and articles to make your sentences grammatically correct. Your Score: B

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